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[you can't get caught if you are not red handed]
murderous lies
living murderous lives
you say it's not still blood
when it dries
crimson ribbons
turned brown and black
it doesnt matter the shade
if the knife's still in your back
you walk around
limping
from the pain in your spine
crooked, in circles
instead of straight lines
living murderous lives
you say it's not still blood
when it dries
crimson ribbons
turned brown and black
it doesnt matter the shade
if the knife's still in your back
you walk around
limping
from the pain in your spine
crooked, in circles
instead of straight lines
Published 25th Jul 2010
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27th Jul 2010 10:32pm
"you walk around
limping
from the pain in your spine
crooked, in circles
instead of straight lines"
that nailed it!
lovin' your short snappy rhythmic style...
limping
from the pain in your spine
crooked, in circles
instead of straight lines"
that nailed it!
lovin' your short snappy rhythmic style...
28th Jul 2010 1:59am
31st Jan 2012 3:47am
very heated and strong with lots of resentment in this one!love it!the tempo caught me off guard and suprised me with the rush!!!!!
