orgasm

Unusual one. Rather like haiku. Short but potent. It doesn't say anything original, of course (few poems do) but yet it retains a real power.

wasnt it the bible that said there's nothing new under the sun.. well.. perhaps.. but we can always sculpt old wood into new figurines

a piece for me to comment, and I am looking forward to the next part.

hope you liked them aside from their brevity

some of the best thoughts are spoken briefly, yours is a beautiful piece.

i agree.. those are some of my favorites too.. of my work and others.. you don't have to put every detail in a piece to get the point across.. thanks much for the compliment.. cheers :D

I liked it. Sums up all the emotion and mixed feelings we as complex - yet carnal - creatures experience in a moment that lasts shorter than it took me to type this. Well captured.

haha shorter than it took to write your comment and shorter than it took to write/read my poem.. haha but that moment of animalistic ferociousness and passion is worth a million words isn't it? the endless muse as i've called it before.. thanks for your support