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The Last Thing That You See Besides Me Is The Thing That Kills You
Lovely, lovely, little thing,
come close,
don't be afraid.
Witness with unblinded eyes
this structure I
hath made.
Built for thee
with mine
bare hands.
Designed for thee,
your death
I've planned.
A simple thing,
not big
or grand,
to catch the
blood that had
drove me mad.
...do you like it?
come close,
don't be afraid.
Witness with unblinded eyes
this structure I
hath made.
Built for thee
with mine
bare hands.
Designed for thee,
your death
I've planned.
A simple thing,
not big
or grand,
to catch the
blood that had
drove me mad.
...do you like it?
Published 23rd Jul 2010
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25th Jul 2010 6:10am
26th Jul 2010 3:53am
1st Aug 2010 11:14pm
It sounds like you're attempting revenge on someone in this poem. I really like it. It sounds conniving.
2nd Aug 2010 4:35am
26th Sep 2010 1:55pm
revenge and eeriness in one small poem.
keep up the good work this is amazing my friend ^_^ xx
keep up the good work this is amazing my friend ^_^ xx
30th Sep 2010 4:39am
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