Some kind of angel

Yes! Someone annoyed with angels... they can be so irritating.

The three-time calling is reminiscent of a - pagan ritual?  Nice touch.

Atakti,

The number three is very important in paganism, I use it a lot without even thinking about it, must be in the blood (or the children's blood I sacrificed to the sun)

Thanks for checking my shit out and laying own your thoughts.  

much appreciated.

Lepperochan- Your write conjures up many images.

Well done...and, Happy Holidays amigo.

Strider

Strider,

I'm almost tempted to give the plot away.  there are a few clues there though, so I'll sit back and wait.

good to see you here man ,have a good xmas yerself.

The spirit trying to get through to the living huh? but she is not hearing, just looking at the the lifeless corpse maybe?

Great one to ponder Eammon. And great pen. :)

Magdalena,

ah, good call missus, I like that. kind of makes what I had in mind a little ..less

I thank you kindly for your visit and thoughts.

Best of wishes to you.  

That show is crazy! I'm hooked though. Do you know everything besides the possessions and alien thing is actually pretty much on point. Instatutions where insane back in the day. Until this day we have clients called richie clients because they where so mistreated that now they get what they need hand and foot. Anyways this is on point loved the meaning in such short piece xoxox much respect

Gig,

One of the few shows I'd recommend. I think the aliens you speak of are simply abominations created by that nazi doctor.

I think It's the same story the world over when a few are put in charge of many who can't speak out.  

Thanks for dropping in and throwing out your thoughts.

best wishes to you.
  


 

How very perfect the verse for the picture. Damn! Lol. I read this first then looked at the pic and said damn outloud. wow. Wish I could describe something I looked at so good it made the pic look like it was made after i wrote it.. lol.

Devilish,

The poem is mostly based on a scene with that woman in it. truth is, I had been smoking and the scene resonated in me for hours after. finding a pic of her from that scene and  with that exact expression was pure luck.

Thank you for dropping in and for your kind words.

best wishes to you.
 

The short ones are my favorite. Simplicity is key, and hard to capture someone in such few words. Wonderful job!

Adele,

appreciate your stopping by and laying down the kind words.
Thank you.

You'd probably be good at suspense or horror stories. You have a dark yet moving narrative voice here which suits the genre perfectly. Thank you for the read.

Cheers Jack,

knowing your affinity to the genre in question it's very encouraging to read your encouragement.

thank you muchly man.

You realize this could be about unrequited love right ?

Just sayin...

Enjoyed reading this Eamonn :)  

Maggie,

I realized that just after I posted it, so I went looking for the image above to keep readers on the right track :)  

really appreciate your pupils missus.

Very simplistic but says tons!  Great job!

Madame Seymore

nice to see you here, thank you kindly for dropping by and leaving some thoughts.

Ohh, the angel of death....as  beautiful as she can be, her white skin and motherly look in her eyes, I appreciate this , a skillfully written  piece of ArT Work .

Biker chick

ahhh, you get it,  thank you for dropping by and checking my scribings out, I appreciate the visit and kind words.