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Can’t.
Nought.
Time-slips.
Mind failing grip.
Erased, hazed, dazed.
Feeling one dimensional...
one-mensional.
Dead.
At rest,
as if I
was an immovable force witnessing the currents of all,
unknowingly,
permeating,
osmosizing,
through and around my little thumb twiddling self
Nought.
Time-slips.
Mind failing grip.
Erased, hazed, dazed.
Feeling one dimensional...
one-mensional.
Dead.
At rest,
as if I
was an immovable force witnessing the currents of all,
unknowingly,
permeating,
osmosizing,
through and around my little thumb twiddling self
Published 22nd Dec 2012
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Anonymous
- Edited 24th Jan 2013 4:35pm
24th Jan 2013 4:34pm
Ah, the throes of frustation....at its finest.
Or is it now ....ennui? Who knows.....
Cool effort, M.
Really enjoyed this, especially that word...one-mensional.
Wow, how cool is that!
Is it a neologism? Did you just invent a word?
Well, whichever way you look at it, it's pure cool streets to you!
Pen on, poet.
Thanks for sharing :-)
Cheers
Tidespotter
Ps. The title....is it an expletive, maybe....?
Or is it now ....ennui? Who knows.....
Cool effort, M.
Really enjoyed this, especially that word...one-mensional.
Wow, how cool is that!
Is it a neologism? Did you just invent a word?
Well, whichever way you look at it, it's pure cool streets to you!
Pen on, poet.
Thanks for sharing :-)
Cheers
Tidespotter
Ps. The title....is it an expletive, maybe....?
26th Jan 2013 3:27pm
Well, ennui is one possible term.
Although, it's not 'really' boredom, so much as just feeling like a stone on the ocean floor.
If you can help me with a word to describe such a feeling that would be great.
I feel this way at times, I'm sure we all do, ya know?
lol... one-mensional...
I'm sure it could be a neologism, but this is what we do, I think - I bastardize english a li'l here and there, and grammar! well...
Cool beans Tidespotter.
P.S. yep
Although, it's not 'really' boredom, so much as just feeling like a stone on the ocean floor.
If you can help me with a word to describe such a feeling that would be great.
I feel this way at times, I'm sure we all do, ya know?
lol... one-mensional...
I'm sure it could be a neologism, but this is what we do, I think - I bastardize english a li'l here and there, and grammar! well...
Cool beans Tidespotter.
P.S. yep
Anonymous
- Edited 26th Jan 2013 4:58pm
26th Jan 2013 4:56pm
Yeah well, I guess that's one way of looking at it.
It's hardly gonna be life, if we feel UP all the time.
Some pal said to me some time ago....if you're feeling way down in the dumps...the only consolation is...the only other way...is UP.
So, take heart, man.
That word you talk about....detached, maybe?
But then again, not quite, hey. Will think some more on it.....
I think that sometimes we THINK we feel like a stone on the ocean floor...but...the very fact that your mind registers that sentiment....makes you NOT a stone.
Yeah, we all feel that way some times.
Glad, though...that you were able to pen it and capture it in words..... :-)
Yeah. Them words which help us to express yet ironically...fail us hopelessly....cos as Flaubert said in his sage words:
"Language is a cracked kettle on which we beat out crude tunes for bears to dance to,
While, all the time, we long to move the stars!"
Pen on, ok!
Cheers
Tidespotter
It's hardly gonna be life, if we feel UP all the time.
Some pal said to me some time ago....if you're feeling way down in the dumps...the only consolation is...the only other way...is UP.
So, take heart, man.
That word you talk about....detached, maybe?
But then again, not quite, hey. Will think some more on it.....
I think that sometimes we THINK we feel like a stone on the ocean floor...but...the very fact that your mind registers that sentiment....makes you NOT a stone.
Yeah, we all feel that way some times.
Glad, though...that you were able to pen it and capture it in words..... :-)
Yeah. Them words which help us to express yet ironically...fail us hopelessly....cos as Flaubert said in his sage words:
"Language is a cracked kettle on which we beat out crude tunes for bears to dance to,
While, all the time, we long to move the stars!"
Pen on, ok!
Cheers
Tidespotter
