deepundergroundpoetry.com
Dreams
I dream of silver stars
That float in the sea
That glitter and shimmer
And wink at me
I dream of a friend
So bright and so true
That sits and listens
And comforts you
I dream of blue eyes
That see through my soul
That share the secrets
That I will hold
I dream of a man
Who smiles when he's sad
With the gentle touch
Of a wonderful dad
That float in the sea
That glitter and shimmer
And wink at me
I dream of a friend
So bright and so true
That sits and listens
And comforts you
I dream of blue eyes
That see through my soul
That share the secrets
That I will hold
I dream of a man
Who smiles when he's sad
With the gentle touch
Of a wonderful dad
Published 1st Sep 2009
| Edited 3rd Apr 2016
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 0
reading list entries 0
comments 5
reads 1044
Commenting Preference:
The author has chosen not to accept new comments at this time.
1st Sep 2009 6:39pm
this is a great poem, in particular "blue eyes that see through you soul that share the secrets that I will hold," reminds me how it is our souls that see and feel one another, not just our bodies...and the last stanza gives a sense of hope for the future, in balance with the past...really, i like this poem very much!
2nd Sep 2009 6:06am
3rd Sep 2009 1:40am
4th Sep 2009 6:24am
Anonymous
15th Jan 2010 2:09am
Hi Shaddoww A. Vega,
Your poem made me dream again for a moment =) Thank you for reminding me to past dreams into real life !! =)
Your poem made me dream again for a moment =) Thank you for reminding me to past dreams into real life !! =)
