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A sad heart
My heart is torn thinking about how I'm the reason your sad. Beleaguered images stain your mind. Makes me shed tears knowing that you feel their is nothing you can do to discontinue such pain. And despite the battered way I've made you feel, you still love me. It breaks my heart even more.
Published 21st Dec 2012
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29th Dec 2012 6:07am
This is thought provoking for me because my efforts to comfort someone in such a situation always seems to backfire. The sadness quickly becomes anger.
Empathy is a quality we could use more of these days.
Empathy is a quality we could use more of these days.
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- Edited 9th Jan 2013 11:26pm
9th Jan 2013 4:38pm
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9th Jan 2013 10:55pm
Anonymous
8th May 2013 2:16am
We all make mistakes, but real love is worth forgiving. :)
8th May 2013 10:05am
