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Death of Him

In the beginning, loved flow like a down stream river
Making love was like standing in the cold, making her shiver
Clouds of warm feelings shrouded them
Cloaked them from the rest of the world
Just as the rain drops fall, he fell for her
Pouring love from his soul to be pure
Until one day his soul felt restless
Then she spoke the words leaving him breathless
She took the breath from him
She was the death of him
Written by lashawnscott92 (Visual Lyricist)
Published | Edited 23rd Dec 2012
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