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Black Moon Rising
And it's all over now
A dull ache fills my soul
It's gonna be a long night
I wasn't expecting this
The reason is unknown
one thing is certain
...this will never be
forgotten and neither
were her tears...
There is a black moon rising
A dull ache fills my soul
It's gonna be a long night
I wasn't expecting this
The reason is unknown
one thing is certain
...this will never be
forgotten and neither
were her tears...
There is a black moon rising
Published 17th Jul 2010
| Edited 24th Sep 2010
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24th Feb 2012 3:03am
You have some weird conflicting tenses in pronoun/verbs in that second to last stanza. "This will...neither were..."
