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My love
I'm wide awake but it feels like i'm dreaming you're so close yet so far this love is my hearts reason for beating I could close my eyes and become lost in the sound of your voice i'm held captive by this sensation sharing myself with someone else is no longer a choice I fell carelessly into the arms of my angel i'd trade all of my riches for your love but to trade your love I would not be able this love is my drug it's like an addiction a beautiful high a blissfull affliction that makes my soul dance to the rhythm of your heartbeat the sensation of your body's warmth makes my knees weak i'll always love your mind and the passion for me you display i will live my life giving thanks for being blessed to be loved this way.
Published 17th Dec 2012
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17th Dec 2012 8:43pm
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17th Dec 2012 11:06pm
this is so sweet......are you? : )
Keep working on that structure and phrasing.
Keep working on that structure and phrasing.
17th Dec 2012 11:11pm
18th Dec 2012 00:27am
Don't limit yourself to conventional structure as the poem was intended to capture emotion not logic. From the poems I have read you seem to be a romantic, often speaking of love and passion.
18th Dec 2012 00:36am
I do write to capture true feelings emotions and desires and when i start to write structure goes out of the window lol. Thank you konphlicated for taking it for what it is.
18th Dec 2012 1:18am
Konphlicated? Like complicated huh? Lol thats cool too but I'm konphlicted like conflicted. Anyways, I think art should never conform and I think your free flow style is unique and adds a "pouring of emotions" type quality to your work. Speaking of which in regards to your request to hear me speak on love, why don't we do a joint poem on the subject?
18th Dec 2012 1:25am
My apologies konphlicted idk why i read it konphlicated i guess i thought you were complicated and conflicted no offence lol. But id love to work with you on a poem about love just tell me when
18th Dec 2012 1:34am
Whenever you feel is fine with me...My idea is to either go back and forth or write it in two parts yours and mine (kinda a yin-yang type thing). If you have other suggestions that is cool too, I don't get to write with others pretty much ever (nobody writes anymore) so I'll just go off of the tone you set.
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18th Dec 2012 1:52am
Just in case the message didn't send we can use this site, email, skype, or phone, its whatever you are comfortable with
