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Let Me Take Your Coat........(The Voyage) Pt. 1
C'mon inside sweetness
Rest yourself for just awhile
An early morning “chocolate kiss”......
…....and oooooo “I like your smile”.
Can I get you anything?
See I've made a few mental notes......
…....and by the way darlin'
Can I take your coat?
Yes puddin', I remember
No panties underneath.
Not to be blount, but it's been six months
Time to give this modesty thang a bit of relief.
You've seen me baby,
From the top of my smooth head
to“the love below”.
It's time to return the favor.
Time to see just how low you're willing to go....
......for me.
Your sexy, dark, sable coat hints
at such a fine brown frame.
You tease me with a suttle hint of skin.
Seems such a shame that.........
…........you won't “share your “poetic love” with me
So let me loosen that belt a bit
so your coat can fall from your shoulders
onto the floor.......
….........and I will be your gift, laid out upon the bed
cum join me, let's explore.
Often you boast, an astute scholar I've heard.
An admitted master of the spoken word
so describe in metaphor this “9 inches of bliss”
the moment you finally feel his hardness.
The moment that you kiss him...........
just
like
this...............
said Agatha Christie, “Murder She Wrote”
Seize the moment baby................
…..........”let me take that coat”
Rest yourself for just awhile
An early morning “chocolate kiss”......
…....and oooooo “I like your smile”.
Can I get you anything?
See I've made a few mental notes......
…....and by the way darlin'
Can I take your coat?
Yes puddin', I remember
No panties underneath.
Not to be blount, but it's been six months
Time to give this modesty thang a bit of relief.
You've seen me baby,
From the top of my smooth head
to“the love below”.
It's time to return the favor.
Time to see just how low you're willing to go....
......for me.
Your sexy, dark, sable coat hints
at such a fine brown frame.
You tease me with a suttle hint of skin.
Seems such a shame that.........
…........you won't “share your “poetic love” with me
So let me loosen that belt a bit
so your coat can fall from your shoulders
onto the floor.......
….........and I will be your gift, laid out upon the bed
cum join me, let's explore.
Often you boast, an astute scholar I've heard.
An admitted master of the spoken word
so describe in metaphor this “9 inches of bliss”
the moment you finally feel his hardness.
The moment that you kiss him...........
just
like
this...............
said Agatha Christie, “Murder She Wrote”
Seize the moment baby................
…..........”let me take that coat”
Published 17th Dec 2012
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18th Dec 2012 1:41am
John Coltrane and Miles Davis pop in my head with this write for some reason. (and yes a bit of Zane as well, from a different medium)
18th Dec 2012 1:51am
......along with a little Shanice, Outkast,DJ Kool, ahint of Janet Jackson and Art Of Noise. (Bet you didn't see that coming) ; )
18th Dec 2012 5:30am
18th Dec 2012 2:51am
........She hangs her coat upon his shoulders, as he lifts her and takes her on a fantastic voyage. :)
This was very sexy, intense and steamy!
Thanks for sharing! xo
This was very sexy, intense and steamy!
Thanks for sharing! xo
18th Dec 2012 4:42am
"..............she hangs her coat upon his shoulders, as he lifts her and takes her on a fantastic voyage........"
I like that right there. Turns a corner in a good place. I need some of that right there. COLLAB?
I like that right there. Turns a corner in a good place. I need some of that right there. COLLAB?
18th Dec 2012 4:49am
