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Goddess

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She is my Venus � �
My Aphrodite � �
My erotic goddess � �
Alexandros fashioned her explicitly....... � �
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.....just for me � �
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An adoration as enduring as granite stone � �
Passion burns deeply, Lady De Milo � �
I will love you eternally � �
In a word, Desire......... � �
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Hellenistically...... � �
there is such an erotic tension � �
that ebbs and flows between you and me � �
It is like the raging waters � �
of the Sarantaporos � �
pouring into the Aegean Sea � �
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You fill me � �
My queen, I want more � �
To feast upon your fertile delta...... � �
......until my mouth is swollen and sore � �
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Mighty Apollo knew *not* � �
what to do with you � �
Never a God nor man enough � �
to pay thy beautiful queen her due......... � �
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Let me taste and explore her flower � �
I shall spread thy petals with my hands � �
Let me bathe inside her river � �
Let me excite her until she can....... � �
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......no longer speak � �
She doth coo as a gentle dove � �
To spread her wings into flight � �
Let me be your God of sensual, erotic love. � �
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As a thief,I raid your fiery temple � �
Slowly, firmly I descend deep into your core � �
Let my swollen, erect member � �
Throb inside your body; to steal your soul � �
.......until you scream like an insaitiable whore � �
I pay my penance and give unto you so much more...... � �
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.......I shall make you mine for a lifetime � �
This lifetime and the next � �
Beautiful Venus de Milo � �
I close with a gentle kiss upon your sensitive, sculptured neck...... � �
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.........my lips feel your passion � �
like the thunder of Sarantaporos mighty descent � �
into a gentle calmness of the Aegean � �
Your beauty sparkles like the waters � �
your reflection...........simply elegant.

Written by MusicallyMrM

(Mr_Mahogany_Wood)

Published 13th Dec 2012 | Edited 17th Dec 2012

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Re: Goddess

rain1courtel (RainC)

13th Dec 2012 7:48pm

DAMNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!
You're a freakin BEAST with a PEN! I have no words for this one! Well, I have one............
DAMNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!! :)

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MusicallyMrM (Mr_Mahogany_Wood)

13th Dec 2012 7:56pm

*I* am a freakin' beast at most things that you like.....; )

Ain't trynna' steal from Jill but...(puttin' my Barry White Spin on this)

"My love is deeper.......
Tighter
Sweeter
Higher
Flyer
Didn't you know this,
Or didn't you notice?"

Thank you for that definitive comment Ms. T : )

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Re: Goddess

JAZZMANOR

13th Dec 2012 7:51pm

Wow, throwing down that challenge to not only mortals but also the gods---now that is what I call intense! A very European feel here even incorporating the King's English!

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MusicallyMrM (Mr_Mahogany_Wood)

13th Dec 2012 8:26pm

Thanks Bro. Jazz. My intellect is starting to trickle out. Gonna' loose all my cool points LOL

Thanks for the read and comment : )

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JAZZMANOR

14th Dec 2012 8:11pm

Sometimes in our unintentional history lessons we lose SOME of the cool points. I don't think it is permanent! You have until the 21st to get them back! (laugh)

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Re: Goddess

scarletvelvet

15th Dec 2012 7:33am

My oh my! Dear MusicallyMrM, another very outstanding piece from you. This spoke to me and excited me on many different levels! I would have added it to my reading list, but I am out of room. :)

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MusicallyMrM (Mr_Mahogany_Wood)

15th Dec 2012 4:12pm

That it spoke to you and excited you is homage enough : )

Thank You Scarlet

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Re: Goddess

QuantumUnion (Anon 456)

15th Dec 2012 8:37pm

i feel humbled...apart from skill...that took a lot of work and knowledge to craft that...

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Re: Goddess

LokiOfLiterati

17th Dec 2012 4:07am

A word thief finds the path indiscrete to steal the hearts complete of EVERY goddess from the past!

Comrade, you are Divine. A man's mind is elevated to the status of the women he associates with. There's no nice way to swerve and spin when you're Iceberg Slim. You chose yours in prose and pen, from closing in on... empowering the armless deMilo! Showering the rest of us with a warm but blessed wily flow!

Your mind was elevated to ALLLL those you kept hidden away...

My intellect is starting to trickle out. Gonna' loose all my cool points

Fake-out master! You had this like a pirate rake and never let it out in patter? Always knew you had the rhythm and the feel to outlast for sure? Music Man before this one I feel like a jester before the feet of a Professor!