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tombstone
This poem is being entered in the You Died Competition
the day i die
and am laid to rest
i want it knowm
i gave life my best
i lived with words
died writing my verse
i loved this life
for better or worse
my last request
i ask if i may
on my tombstone
i want it to say:
here's faithmairee
who finally rests
no more poeing
for this poetess
the day i die
and am laid to rest
i want it knowm
i gave life my best
i lived with words
died writing my verse
i loved this life
for better or worse
my last request
i ask if i may
on my tombstone
i want it to say:
here's faithmairee
who finally rests
no more poeing
for this poetess
Written by
faithmairee
(Faith Elizabeth Brigham)
Published 17th Dec 2012
| Edited 18th May 2022
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Re: tombstone
17th Dec 2012 12:34pm
Funny how poets always seem to become famous once they have died.
Nicely penned and expressed Faith.
Nicely penned and expressed Faith.
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re: Re: tombstone
18th Dec 2012 00:05am
So true, Magdalena. This one was fun to write though. Thanks for your lovely comments.
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Anonymous
17th Dec 2012 1:31pm
Wonderful epitaph you wrote, Faith Elizabeth!
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18th Dec 2012 00:06am
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17th Dec 2012 5:32pm
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18th Dec 2012 00:08am
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19th Dec 2012 4:31am
I love This!
Favorite stanza: "i lived with words
died writing my verse
i loved this life
for better or worse"
Very Nice! :)
Favorite stanza: "i lived with words
died writing my verse
i loved this life
for better or worse"
Very Nice! :)
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re: Re: tombstone
19th Dec 2012 4:33am
Re: tombstone
Anonymous
20th Dec 2012 5:51pm
Faith Elizabeth
Lovely poem and an enjoyable read. Love the last stanza, and especially:
"no more poeing
for this poetess"
Memorable! :)
Carlene
Lovely poem and an enjoyable read. Love the last stanza, and especially:
"no more poeing
for this poetess"
Memorable! :)
Carlene
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re: Re: tombstone
21st Dec 2012 1:25am
Thanks so much, Carlene. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I created the word "poeing" and first used it in my poem "If Singers Sing". Since you like this poem, you might enjoy it, too.
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Anonymous
21st Dec 2012 4:38am
You're very welcome, Faith. Very imaginative creation, on your part, of the word "poeing." Yep. I found "If Singers Sing" and commented. Just wonderful..!! I need to read more of your work. And WILL do! :)
Carlene
Carlene
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re: re: re: Re: tombstone
21st Dec 2012 1:44pm
Thank you, Carlene. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Your wonderful remarks made my day!
Anonymous
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