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Broken Sun
A broken sun rises over the world this day
It's fractured light drips life even as it falls, dying.
The earth revels as it spins
Soaked in the blood of a titan
Published 16th Dec 2012
| Edited 19th Dec 2012
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16th Dec 2012 6:43pm
Lines!
A broken sun rises over the world this day. It's fractured
light drips life even as it falls, dying. The earth
revels as it spins, soaked in the blood of a titan.
You may not have to add to it, see how it sits with you.
A broken sun rises over the world this day. It's fractured
light drips life even as it falls, dying. The earth
revels as it spins, soaked in the blood of a titan.
You may not have to add to it, see how it sits with you.
16th Dec 2012 10:36pm
Lol thank you :) I might just leave it at that and call it a haiku, if I add to it it'll probably just get convoluted
