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Bring the Rain
intersection
of non-duality and intimacy...
self-knowledge....
Being conscious
of the All
Beyond sensorium:
Relieved of emotional interference,
Only the clear, pure, understanding
Detached and aware
The ultimate logic
Unconditional love.
There are no sides
to choose.
No sales gimmicks.
No luck.
No hidden agendas.
Nothing to gain.
Pointlessness in a unified field;
One vibration.
runningturtle87
of non-duality and intimacy...
self-knowledge....
Being conscious
of the All
Beyond sensorium:
Relieved of emotional interference,
Only the clear, pure, understanding
Detached and aware
The ultimate logic
Unconditional love.
There are no sides
to choose.
No sales gimmicks.
No luck.
No hidden agendas.
Nothing to gain.
Pointlessness in a unified field;
One vibration.
runningturtle87
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Re: Bring the Rain
16th Dec 2012 5:22am
I love it. I have to read more of you I believe I can learn from you. I am always open to knowledge sir. thank you .
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re: Re: Bring the Rain
16th Dec 2012 11:50am
Re: Bring the Rain
16th Dec 2012 6:47am
'Bring the Rain' turns out to be the metaphoric display of a poet's practicing awareness when having been creatively caught in the act of progress.
This recognition of how any moment found lacking in permanence proves to ultimately motivate any number of useful aspects that's found inherent to an unborn emptiness.
The rain- an ataraxic cascade of relief from a formidable disposition.
And it pours
And pours
Poor thing.
This recognition of how any moment found lacking in permanence proves to ultimately motivate any number of useful aspects that's found inherent to an unborn emptiness.
The rain- an ataraxic cascade of relief from a formidable disposition.
And it pours
And pours
Poor thing.
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16th Dec 2012 11:54am
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16th Dec 2012 11:57am
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16th Dec 2012 8:56am
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3rd Jan 2013 10:14pm
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16th Dec 2012 10:41am
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Re: Bring the Rain
16th Dec 2012 1:06pm
Pure as rain...
Drops of realization to slake our thirst for awareness?
The universal frequency thrums.
Drops of realization to slake our thirst for awareness?
The universal frequency thrums.
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16th Dec 2012 8:01pm
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Re: Bring the Rain
3rd Jan 2013 10:03pm
Yoda,
I am a padawan in the presence of a master. But even my adoration for your poetry, is merely the sun admiring his own reflection.
I share this mantra (something that came to me during a spiritual voyage),
"All life is one, everything is one."
I see that your poem mentions this truth.
"Pure existance is peace"
I really like the coupling of
"The ultimate logic
Unconditional love"
It speaks to both the spiritual and psychological aspect of the subject. Those lines really made sense after I looked up "non-duality", found that its a term used in various religious practuces as well as psychology.
My one area of confusion is; how does the title "Bring the Rain", connect with the content of the poem?
Divine words
I am a padawan in the presence of a master. But even my adoration for your poetry, is merely the sun admiring his own reflection.
I share this mantra (something that came to me during a spiritual voyage),
"All life is one, everything is one."
I see that your poem mentions this truth.
"Pure existance is peace"
I really like the coupling of
"The ultimate logic
Unconditional love"
It speaks to both the spiritual and psychological aspect of the subject. Those lines really made sense after I looked up "non-duality", found that its a term used in various religious practuces as well as psychology.
My one area of confusion is; how does the title "Bring the Rain", connect with the content of the poem?
Divine words
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re: Re: Bring the Rain
3rd Jan 2013 10:18pm
The rain falls on us all...
Beyond sensorium:
Relieved of emotional interference,
Only the clear, pure, understanding
Detached and aware
that this is so can be of no real consequence then...rain or nor....when it rains..it is so...bring the rain or not, it makes no eternal difference...it is merely a projected perception.
Beyond sensorium:
Relieved of emotional interference,
Only the clear, pure, understanding
Detached and aware
that this is so can be of no real consequence then...rain or nor....when it rains..it is so...bring the rain or not, it makes no eternal difference...it is merely a projected perception.