Sixty-Nine

Tina Turner and David Bowie do a song by the same name. Your words here reminded me of it. The meaning of the song is further highlighted when the two slow danced while singing it in the live version.

would like it not as a paragraph but each thought on a separate line.  so much easier to read.

I will keep that in mind thank you

Yes your words get me hot as fiyah.  Diggin' it like an old soul record!  Hope you don't mind what I'm getting ready to do, but read this revision.  Let me know if it reads better pretty brown eyes : )

"I climb up on the bed and straddle my man
My fat pussy in your face and your balls in my hand.

I start licking you real slow from the base to the tip
and caressing your balls with a firm gentle grip.

With my hands on my nipples my pussy is dripping wet
I swallow your dick while you finger fuck my slit.

A soft quiet moan escapes from your lips
I know youre getting close because youre thrusting those hips.

Im tingling now from my waist to my toes
The pressure is building; Im ready to go.

"Babe right there I love that shit ".
You making circles with your tongue while youre sucking my clit.

My mouth on your dick is a sexy, sensual mess. I'm gagging, eyes watering you say "damn you're the best."

You're so close to the top but not yet-I can't let you go.
I slide my tongue down your balls, your dick is so hard your cum is so..........

.....close massaging that spot Its just what you need.
My mouth working that dick with increasing speeed.

Your toes start to flex and youre still eating me just right.
Im so hot and ready but we're cuming together tonight.

The sounds we're letting out say I'm about to explode.
When all of a sudden Im squirting while swallowing your load.

We are not done yet my pussy is aching for more.
Let's get in the shower and begin vour next episode.........
 

MrM it certainly does i am always open to suggestions especially if they are for my benefit.

I am usually not into erotica at all, but this one's steaming sexy hot! Nice one!

Thank you Michael.g.m

Ms. Pretty, I love the way you describe my favorite sport.
O, M, G, please make a mess of me lol
Sweets I love the pen you give me

I truly l love it sweets
pen on baby pen on!!!

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yess yess and more yess's this was that Exquisite ishh., exactly what i aim for non-basic., the flow of your words the way they fit in the sentences., tuhh you definitely got it mamas!

Thank you pinkyy!!!  I'm glad you like it

No thank you(: