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To the king.
This poem is meant for the King Bhumibol of Thailand. It might be published so I kinda need you guys' comments to improve it. Thanks in advance.
Under your grace we are sheltered.
Guided, lightened, we live wisely.
Loyal servants, we bow our heads and hearts.
Forever yours we all shall be.
Under your grace we are sheltered.
Guided, lightened, we live wisely.
Loyal servants, we bow our heads and hearts.
Forever yours we all shall be.
Published 9th Dec 2012
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