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The Return
Return to me from far across the miles
Return to me with wolf’s growls and smiles
Come to me with passion and fire
Come to me with never ending desire
Bring to me your crop and your cane
Bring to me your delightful pain
Force me again down onto my knees
Force me again to admit to my needs
Take me down to that place deep inside
Take me to those feelings I hide
Make me beg for your clemency
Make me plead for just a little mercy
Show me you have no sympathy
Show me I deserve no amenity
Tell me I’m just a bad little whore
Tell me I just want some more
Give to me your demands and control
Give to me that which makes me feel whole
Return to me with wolf’s growls and smiles
Come to me with passion and fire
Come to me with never ending desire
Bring to me your crop and your cane
Bring to me your delightful pain
Force me again down onto my knees
Force me again to admit to my needs
Take me down to that place deep inside
Take me to those feelings I hide
Make me beg for your clemency
Make me plead for just a little mercy
Show me you have no sympathy
Show me I deserve no amenity
Tell me I’m just a bad little whore
Tell me I just want some more
Give to me your demands and control
Give to me that which makes me feel whole
Published 8th Dec 2012
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8th Dec 2012 1:53am
Maybe because of the release of the Hobbit, when I saw the word "Return" I thought of royalty, specifically Aragon/Strider.
There is a certain agreement to feel the other person's power which is very exciting here.
There is a certain agreement to feel the other person's power which is very exciting here.
8th Dec 2012 1:08pm
I like the flow of it. And the poem is soft, even though the person is wanting to be completely subdued by another.
8th Dec 2012 1:24pm
