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Bent Light
Bent light breaks
Sending leaves twittering over
ground as 2yr. Olds.
Rolls over itself
and is gone
Sending leaves twittering over
ground as 2yr. Olds.
Rolls over itself
and is gone
Published 31st Aug 2009
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31st Aug 2009 6:07pm
I dont know I m having the right to say so or not but since this site values my suggestions, I think this is utterly stupid...What is this yaar?...What is bent light?...Is it bent or bend light?..Mr. Poet what do you wanna express in this poem...or do you wanna joke?
1st Sep 2009 4:08am
I enjoyed the poem personally. The changing of the seasons (as with many acts of nature) have a tendency to remind us of our own mortality.
1st Sep 2009 2:29pm
Thank you for both your comments.
Yr stand for year, but I chose to write it as it is spoken in NZ shortened and as one word. This poem was written from a particular moment seen and as a conceit.
I was not a joke or supposed to be comically funny.
Yr stand for year, but I chose to write it as it is spoken in NZ shortened and as one word. This poem was written from a particular moment seen and as a conceit.
I was not a joke or supposed to be comically funny.
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