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This is how you made me...
I feel the love.
No; It's just hate.
I see the blade
That just can't wait.
I feel the blood
That flows from my arm.
I cry the tears
That are from your harm..
No; It's just hate.
I see the blade
That just can't wait.
I feel the blood
That flows from my arm.
I cry the tears
That are from your harm..
Published 7th Dec 2012
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7th Dec 2012 12:48pm
This poem is obviously filled with hurt, I like the way you talk through the poem. My heart aches for you, I can definitely relate to this. Maybe you can emphasize the power in that last line possibly by giving it its own stanza. Great job.
