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The Visit
Your response to
me was unpredictable
responsiveness: you
are less solid than
liquid, like side-long,
expansive: lushly observant,
fertile, fanciful, capable
of any type of anamorphosis:
your dripping cloyishness
is like heat, even your
boredom is gorgeously sensuous.
me was unpredictable
responsiveness: you
are less solid than
liquid, like side-long,
expansive: lushly observant,
fertile, fanciful, capable
of any type of anamorphosis:
your dripping cloyishness
is like heat, even your
boredom is gorgeously sensuous.
Published 6th Dec 2012
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6th Dec 2012 5:26pm
"you
are less solid than
liquid, like side-long,
expansive"
Liking that a lot !
Enjoyed reading this :)
are less solid than
liquid, like side-long,
expansive"
Liking that a lot !
Enjoyed reading this :)
7th Dec 2012 2:02pm
unpredictable responsiveness..anamorphosis! digging the subtle nuances of love here. Couldnt be expressed better than this.
ahh! could feel this, "even your
boredom is gorgeously sensuous."
thanxx fr lovely read:)
ahh! could feel this, "even your
boredom is gorgeously sensuous."
thanxx fr lovely read:)
