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Haiku - Exposed (finale)

an eagle shrieks as
the bunny hops to safety;
a lesson is learned

Written by cjflier

Published 5th Dec 2012

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Re: Haiku - Exposed (finale)

Magdalena

5th Dec 2012 11:17pm

A great finale Cj.

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cjflier

- Edited 6th Dec 2012 3:36am

6th Dec 2012 3:26am

Thank you very much. I guess I bowed to peer pressure in favor of the bunny. ha ha ha.

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Re: Haiku - Exposed (finale)

Atakti

6th Dec 2012 9:37am

Wooot!

Pssst I'm not crazy about squirrels, so... lol

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cjflier

6th Dec 2012 1:32pm

I'm glad you approve. ha ha ha. Next time I'll off the squirrel.

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Re: Haiku - Exposed (finale)

Anonymous

8th Dec 2012 6:35pm

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cjflier

8th Dec 2012 7:35pm

Thank you very much. This was an unintended part III. I got some "friendly flack" over the bunny in the first one, so made a sequel, which resulted in this one. Thanks again.

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