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Haiku - Exposed
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Haiku - Exposed
a rabbit trembles
in a large field of tall grass;
the old wolf smells fear
Written by
cjflier
Published
4th Dec 2012
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Re: Haiku - Exposed
Magdalena
(Spartalena)
4th Dec 2012 11:21pm
Seen with out being seen, fear does have a strong odour.
Great haiku Cj.
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cjflier
5th Dec 2012 5:21am
Thank you. Too bad humans can't be as in tune with their surroundings as animals are.
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Re: Haiku - Exposed
Anonymous
5th Dec 2012 8:12am
Very nicely done, haiku is such a facenating style. Could see the image, could see the rabbit shivering, hiding and the wolfs piercing eyes
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cjflier
5th Dec 2012 5:11pm
Thank you very much. I am enjoying the challenge of writing these. I'm glad it has the effect and affect I was hoping for.
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Atakti
5th Dec 2012 4:53pm
Poor bunny!
Another great haiku. :)
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cjflier
5th Dec 2012 5:13pm
Now, now. We don't know what happened to the bunny (until the next one where the wolf is licking his chops. ha ha ha). Glad you liked it
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