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The seed
You climbed inside my chest
and planted the seed of love
deep into my heart.
You watered it with sweet gentle kisses.
And now its grown,and branched so big.
Anyone would see it.
So when lifes candle comes to an end.
I do not fear now about offering my body
back to the soil.
I know even when we pass our souls
will dance together for eternity.
and planted the seed of love
deep into my heart.
You watered it with sweet gentle kisses.
And now its grown,and branched so big.
Anyone would see it.
So when lifes candle comes to an end.
I do not fear now about offering my body
back to the soil.
I know even when we pass our souls
will dance together for eternity.
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10th Dec 2012 2:43pm
"I know even when we pass our souls
will dance together for eternity."--hopefully this comment isn't taken wrong but this poem reminded me so much of my grandparents who shared 62 years together before my grams passed. The love they showed each other til the end..and dancing in eternity...this is what it is all about! Thanks!!
will dance together for eternity."--hopefully this comment isn't taken wrong but this poem reminded me so much of my grandparents who shared 62 years together before my grams passed. The love they showed each other til the end..and dancing in eternity...this is what it is all about! Thanks!!
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