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My Body
My Body
My body, my body, has always had my back
My body, my body, has taken the brunt of my attack
I've put things in it, that was not intended for man
So my body, my body, revolts at my plan
I go to the doctor, he gives me the notice
My body, my body, a permanent prognosis
He gives me medicine, to help with the progression
But my body, my body, is in constant regression
So I carry on the best that I can
Trying to keep up, with life's grueling demands
My life today is different, I don't live the same way
I love and forgive, but my body is still in pain
My body, my body, has always had my back
My body, my body, has taken the brunt of my attack
I've put things in it, that was not intended for man
So my body, my body, revolts at my plan
I go to the doctor, he gives me the notice
My body, my body, a permanent prognosis
He gives me medicine, to help with the progression
But my body, my body, is in constant regression
So I carry on the best that I can
Trying to keep up, with life's grueling demands
My life today is different, I don't live the same way
I love and forgive, but my body is still in pain
Published 4th Jul 2010
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8th Jul 2010 4:52pm
I am inspired by your strength and will to survive.
I especially liked the last line
" I love and forgive, but my body is still in pain ".It shows that you accept your sentence and blame no one directly.
Share this strenght with others who are in need of it...there are millions out there.
I especially liked the last line
" I love and forgive, but my body is still in pain ".It shows that you accept your sentence and blame no one directly.
Share this strenght with others who are in need of it...there are millions out there.
11th Jul 2010 2:37am
Thank you for your comment. I hope to show those of us out there who have done things in our life that have caused us and or others pain, that it can be used for positive if we carry a message of hope and accountability. Thank you again
19th Jul 2010 7:56pm
25th Jul 2010 6:53am
Thank you for taking your time to read it and I will keep my head up, thank you.
25th Aug 2010 6:38am
You worded this poem beautifully, I was intrigued throughout. I love this poem, lol. Good job! :) Keep up the good work.
1st Sep 2010 4:33am
Thank you so much for the kind words and thank you most of all for taking time to read something I wrote. I do not think I am very good at writing poems as a matter of fact I think I suck but it helps me to deal with life, thanks again.
