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My daughter called me tommie...
We look for signs in all we do
It's a natural thing ...
Something god intended for us to do
I forget that sometimes as I try and find my way
But it's often the little things people do and say
My daughter called me tommie today
This by itself is no real feat; she eighteen months and it was kind of sweet
I'm big on this thing of staying true and I'm not trying to do it for you,you or you
The point is that no one living calls me by that name
So when Alivia said it ... I felt kind of strange
I thought who could have told her that... from whom did she hear
When I realized who it was from ... other things became so clear
Hi grandmom ... all is well and I'm doing fine
Just keep telling Alivia what's on your mind
My daughter called me tommie today
It's a natural thing ...
Something god intended for us to do
I forget that sometimes as I try and find my way
But it's often the little things people do and say
My daughter called me tommie today
This by itself is no real feat; she eighteen months and it was kind of sweet
I'm big on this thing of staying true and I'm not trying to do it for you,you or you
The point is that no one living calls me by that name
So when Alivia said it ... I felt kind of strange
I thought who could have told her that... from whom did she hear
When I realized who it was from ... other things became so clear
Hi grandmom ... all is well and I'm doing fine
Just keep telling Alivia what's on your mind
My daughter called me tommie today
Published 3rd Dec 2012
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4th Dec 2012 3:57am
There is nothing like the love and greetings from a child
I look forward to more of your work.
I look forward to more of your work.
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16th Feb 2013 9:36am
"I thought who could have told her that... from whom did she hear
When I realized who it was from ... other things became so clear
Hi grandmom ... all is well and I'm doing fine
Just keep telling Alivia what's on your mind"
Thank you for this awesome read.
When I realized who it was from ... other things became so clear
Hi grandmom ... all is well and I'm doing fine
Just keep telling Alivia what's on your mind"
Thank you for this awesome read.
