deepundergroundpoetry.com
I've Finally Left This Place
Tell the ones who have
cared enough that
I have finally left this place.
I was never acknowledged in the first place,
I was treated like the moonless dark.
No one saw. I have finally left this place.
It happened quickly, it was cold and painful,
Cruel some would say..
But hey, I've finally left this place,
So tell those who cared enough,
It won't take long, because no one was there
In the end.
cared enough that
I have finally left this place.
I was never acknowledged in the first place,
I was treated like the moonless dark.
No one saw. I have finally left this place.
It happened quickly, it was cold and painful,
Cruel some would say..
But hey, I've finally left this place,
So tell those who cared enough,
It won't take long, because no one was there
In the end.
Published 2nd Dec 2012
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 4
reading list entries 0
comments 4
reads 663
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
2nd Dec 2012 12:58pm
Wow, this took me back to my moonless dark about four and a half years ago ...
You bottled the feelings and then poured them out on the page. Well done!
You bottled the feelings and then poured them out on the page. Well done!
2nd Dec 2012 8:20pm
25th Dec 2012 6:01am
I like this one a lot. It's very dark (which is dumb of me to say, considering you categorized it that way.)
25th Dec 2012 6:09am
