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“Breathe”
Where I walk today
Pilgrims would roll their eyes and wonder
Through forbidden shortcuts
Through the wind and the rain
I talked to the mountain
And the mountain said "go"
Over the horizon
But the horizon said "wait"
Now and then
I suppose I see the truth
Of the wondrous joys this life brings
The off beaten tracks
And sprawling golden paths
The Indians dragging post on horseback,
Rock formation
And cloud formations
The wonders of the open sky
The aurora borealis speaks to me
It Shine's Like street lights
stand's out like neon signs
Like candle light
that shines in secret shrine’s
All I have to do is
Breathe.
Where I walk today
Is a victory in some small way
I talked to the mountain
And the mountains said "leave"
Over lost horizon's
And the horizon
said “breathe”.
Just Breathe
marcus
just breathe!!
Pilgrims would roll their eyes and wonder
Through forbidden shortcuts
Through the wind and the rain
I talked to the mountain
And the mountain said "go"
Over the horizon
But the horizon said "wait"
Now and then
I suppose I see the truth
Of the wondrous joys this life brings
The off beaten tracks
And sprawling golden paths
The Indians dragging post on horseback,
Rock formation
And cloud formations
The wonders of the open sky
The aurora borealis speaks to me
It Shine's Like street lights
stand's out like neon signs
Like candle light
that shines in secret shrine’s
All I have to do is
Breathe.
Where I walk today
Is a victory in some small way
I talked to the mountain
And the mountains said "leave"
Over lost horizon's
And the horizon
said “breathe”.
Just Breathe
marcus
just breathe!!
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Re: “Breathe”
30th Nov 2012 10:07pm
re: Re: “Breathe”
30th Nov 2012 10:10pm
Cheers nikki, this is based on my "trip" to the grand canyon several years ago it was snowing and we had to put spikes on our boots
cheers for reading
marcus
cheers for reading
marcus
Re: “Breathe”
30th Nov 2012 10:54pm
re: Re: “Breathe”
30th Nov 2012 11:05pm
Thanks very much, i have such amazing memory's climbing the grand canyon
cheers
marcus
cheers
marcus
Re: “Breathe”
Anonymous
30th Nov 2012 11:04pm
Lovely marcus....inhaling now!
Strider :)
Strider :)
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re: Re: “Breathe”
30th Nov 2012 11:07pm
Re: “Breathe”
1st Dec 2012 00:33am
Breathe indeed, it should be the simplest thing yet sometimes so hard to remember to do. Top draw write!
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re: Re: “Breathe”
1st Dec 2012 9:09am
I agree, i have the ashama inhaler always on stand by, it good to stand at the top of the world and just breathe in the atmosphere.
cheers for reading
marcus
cheers for reading
marcus
Re: “Breathe”
1st Dec 2012 1:04am
re: Re: “Breathe”
1st Dec 2012 9:03am
Re: “Breathe”
1st Dec 2012 2:41am
re: Re: “Breathe”
1st Dec 2012 9:04am
Totally agree with you dude, as janet jackson once sung "the best things in life are free" (no idea where that came from)
cheers
marcus
cheers
marcus
Re: “Breathe”
Anonymous
1st Dec 2012 4:13pm
Very nicely written! Its like a meditation of sorts, very calming words
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re: Re: “Breathe”
1st Dec 2012 4:43pm
Thanks very much i think these word have a calming influence on me, always remember to breathe
cheers
marcus
cheers
marcus
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24th Nov 2013 8:23pm
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