love,love,love ( yeah right)

The end really got me.... In still thinking about it

Yh. I liked the end. The brevity of the poem makes that last part hit hard.

You really have to work harder on your writing, try writing more about your feelings, and longer poems, this isn't really a poem. It's more like a run on sentence.

thanks and  XxMockingbirdxX ok but go check out my song so lonely

I love quick sharp expressive reads...you say so much ...expressive brevity is a true gift...saves these old eyes...thanks

the artwork is fantastic is it yours?

no a friend helped me do it

like the short but deep thought towards the end
nice hit