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Smell Me
Do I smell sweet
does my perfume
evoke thoughts
of a languid love treat.
Smell me…
Can you tell
if I just left the room?
Do you recognize my scent?
It calls only to you…
Smell me…
Do I exude sex?
A mix of gardenia,
sandalwood and patchouli,
the rareness you like best.
Smell me…
Is it sweet almond oil,
milk and honey?
Do you know my scent,
unique pheromones?
Smell me…
When I pass you by,
let it fill your mind
until it makes you fantasize,
about what the rest smells like…
Smell me…
Does it make you go wild?
Do I make you want just reach out
wrapping me into your arms,
and inhale all my female charms?
Smell me…
Let my scent imprint onto your soul
dwelling deep there in your heart
where no one else can go
and we shall never be apart.
Gypsy red
Published 29th Nov 2012
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29th Nov 2012 2:43pm
Aromas evoke some wonderful things. A beautiful write dear. :) Nice to see you posting.
29th Nov 2012 3:02pm
Yes I agree 100%. Thank you my dearest friend my job is reeking havoc on my poetic life...
Red
Red
29th Nov 2012 2:48pm
The scent of a woman can be the perfect aphrodisiac! This read was soft, sensual and sexy, like a woman with just a hint of gardenia,
sandalwood and patchouli, mixed together gracing the senses of all who smell her. xo
sandalwood and patchouli, mixed together gracing the senses of all who smell her. xo
29th Nov 2012 3:04pm
We women are masters of such things and it is one of our best lures, thnak you for the wonderful comment Ms. Rain glad you like this piece.
Red
Red
29th Nov 2012 2:59pm
29th Nov 2012 3:04pm
Silly turtle in the busted up shell are sticking your nose in the wind again?lol Thanks bigg huggs
Red
Red
29th Nov 2012 3:24pm
Very cool i love a good scent its a rile of attraction i find.
amazing stuff
marcus
amazing stuff
marcus
29th Nov 2012 4:43pm
29th Nov 2012 3:34pm
Yes my Gypsy!!!! Nice write sweetheart.. The scent of a women can drive a man crazy!!
29th Nov 2012 4:48pm
Anonymous
29th Nov 2012 4:05pm
Yes, I agree with Ms. Magdalena....
Nice write, Red.
Strider :)
Nice write, Red.
Strider :)
29th Nov 2012 4:55pm
Anonymous
29th Nov 2012 8:20pm
Gypsy Red,
It is the wisp of a scent that invades our mind, wrapping itself around our soul. Nice erotic write!
tornado
It is the wisp of a scent that invades our mind, wrapping itself around our soul. Nice erotic write!
tornado
29th Nov 2012 9:18pm
Thank you T! I am glad you stopped by to read this piece.I appreciate the love.
Red
Red
29th Nov 2012 8:25pm
29th Nov 2012 9:18pm
30th Nov 2012 12:55pm
Gardenias and patchouli....scents that stir my core :)yummmm to the yummmm
30th Nov 2012 2:31pm
"Nature boy!!!" where have you been surfing a wave somewhere chasing down some bear? hahaha Thanks for the comment huggs and smooches.
Red
Red
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30th Nov 2012 1:42pm
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30th Nov 2012 2:33pm
Ohhh Gabriel you smooth talker you lol glad you liked it, Thank you so much for reading and comment my piece.
Besos bello
Red
Besos bello
Red
30th Nov 2012 11:43pm
Indeed the scent of the person you love always beckons you and can drive you crazy with lust and love. Chalk it up to pheromones those little cupids in disguise. :)
1st Dec 2012 8:49am
Yes the sense of smell can to some very wonderful things and in this case be very erotic. Thank you for the great comment!
Red
Red
11th Dec 2012 8:00am
"Does it make you go wild?
Do I make you want just reach out
wrapping me into your arms,
and inhale all my female charms? "
I especially liked this part. Oh the power we hold in ever part of us, even our scent. Enjoyed it, Gypsy.
Honey <3
Do I make you want just reach out
wrapping me into your arms,
and inhale all my female charms? "
I especially liked this part. Oh the power we hold in ever part of us, even our scent. Enjoyed it, Gypsy.
Honey <3
27th Jan 2013 2:17am
20th Jan 2013 2:27am
WOW and DAMN sweets I smelled it and it smells delightful
Great read I'll have to read more of your works..
Grand job!!
Lancelott
Great read I'll have to read more of your works..
Grand job!!
Lancelott
27th Jan 2013 2:21am
Thank you so much Lance I was gone for a while but now that I am back I home live up to the my readers expectations. FyI I posted another nice titled: Passion hope you like it. :-)
Red
Red
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