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Smiling Blade
The blade is smiling in my hand
Waiting for me to puncture the skin
Whispering for me to continue the jaggered artwork
To feel the blood trickle down my body
Crying empty tears of sorrow
When the blade become the peacemaker
That is when the conrol is empowering
Waiting for me to puncture the skin
Whispering for me to continue the jaggered artwork
To feel the blood trickle down my body
Crying empty tears of sorrow
When the blade become the peacemaker
That is when the conrol is empowering
Published 29th Nov 2012
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29th Nov 2012 5:45am
I Really like This!
But i Have One Question.
What control are you talking about in the last line? control over emotions? yourself? Pain?
I hope to see more by you soon!
But i Have One Question.
What control are you talking about in the last line? control over emotions? yourself? Pain?
I hope to see more by you soon!
29th Nov 2012 6:00am
Whispering for me to continue the jaggered artwork
To feel the blood trickle down my body
Crying empty tears of sorrow
Beautiful, beautiful.
To feel the blood trickle down my body
Crying empty tears of sorrow
Beautiful, beautiful.
29th Nov 2012 6:01am
Thankyou!
Control in the last line means my control over some aspect in my life, that I am controlling what is happening to me and how the feeling of control is pleasurable
Control in the last line means my control over some aspect in my life, that I am controlling what is happening to me and how the feeling of control is pleasurable
29th Nov 2012 3:41pm
~***~ I understand Your feeling of control is pleasurable. My feeling of control is overpowering the emotional pain ~***~
