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busy,busy,busy
mon
drink
lie
sing songs
die
repeat
tues
wake
vomit
shower
drink
die
repeat
weds
suffer
suffer
suffer
drink
repeat
thurs
drink
lie some more
lose
die
repeat
fri
try
try
try
cry in vain
drink
sing songs
die
repeat
sat
drink
drink
drink
vomit
repeat
sing songs
die
repeat
sun
wake
vomit
shower
drink
repent
no fuck that
drink some more
lie some more
die some more
repeat
drink
lie
sing songs
die
repeat
tues
wake
vomit
shower
drink
die
repeat
weds
suffer
suffer
suffer
drink
repeat
thurs
drink
lie some more
lose
die
repeat
fri
try
try
try
cry in vain
drink
sing songs
die
repeat
sat
drink
drink
drink
vomit
repeat
sing songs
die
repeat
sun
wake
vomit
shower
drink
repent
no fuck that
drink some more
lie some more
die some more
repeat
Published 28th Nov 2012
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Anonymous
28th Nov 2012 5:43am
I actually quite like this. The poems one word lines give it a harsh and abrupt backbone, conveying the monotony of the general frustrations of everyday life.
I don't know why but Morrissey's 'every day is like Sunday' came into my head after I'd read it.
I don't know why but Morrissey's 'every day is like Sunday' came into my head after I'd read it.
28th Nov 2012 5:44am
Yes, busy, busy, busy drowning yourself!
You're even too busy to die.
Very different ink Ive read from you! I love the diversity in your writings. xoxo
You're even too busy to die.
Very different ink Ive read from you! I love the diversity in your writings. xoxo
28th Nov 2012 6:02am
thank you very much ladies. i try to pencil in a good abusive relationship as well when i have time...
8th Dec 2012 9:59am
grand title and work as per usual ..... i loved the fast pace and sense of monotony
