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I am ME
My imprefections makes me who I am
A look in my past reveals flaws
Flaws that today makes me prefect
Not proud of the things I've done
But I can stare at my reflection
With head held high pouring with respect
Who am I? I ask my reflection.
I am who I am! I am ME.
The daily pride in my stride
The honor in my uniform
The man I have become
Over the years look back,
and see how I have transformed
The cracks along the way make me, ME
So don't judge this books by it's cover
Because my outside is all that you see
Look deep and you will reveal why I am ME.
A look in my past reveals flaws
Flaws that today makes me prefect
Not proud of the things I've done
But I can stare at my reflection
With head held high pouring with respect
Who am I? I ask my reflection.
I am who I am! I am ME.
The daily pride in my stride
The honor in my uniform
The man I have become
Over the years look back,
and see how I have transformed
The cracks along the way make me, ME
So don't judge this books by it's cover
Because my outside is all that you see
Look deep and you will reveal why I am ME.
Published 22nd Nov 2012
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- Edited 9th Nov 2018 2:45pm
22nd Nov 2012 2:52pm
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22nd Nov 2012 3:30pm
22nd Nov 2012 5:06pm
Check your spelling, and I wouldn't advise the capitals on 'me'. I can understand what you mean. The content is there but it is not visually appealing to the reader. Work on that.
25th Nov 2012 3:34pm
27th Nov 2012 8:38pm
i would have to gently disagree with Literary Antiquity.. I am a fan of capitalizations and oddly spaced sentences..just my own personal take.
