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Snow
A temporary blanket
Over the broken ground
It hides the reality
And falls without a sound
It's white is so pure
That it blinds your eyes
When it glitters in the sunlight
It's like a big white lie
Underneath the fluff
Lies cracked and dead earth
I guess, I'm kind of like snow
Smiling exterior hiding an empty girl
Over the broken ground
It hides the reality
And falls without a sound
It's white is so pure
That it blinds your eyes
When it glitters in the sunlight
It's like a big white lie
Underneath the fluff
Lies cracked and dead earth
I guess, I'm kind of like snow
Smiling exterior hiding an empty girl
Published 21st Nov 2012
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21st Nov 2012 2:52pm
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Anonymous
21st Nov 2012 3:41pm
A nice poem here CC.
Strider
Strider
21st Nov 2012 6:45pm
21st Nov 2012 6:39pm
Not as aggressive as I've come to be accustomed to by you. A nice vulnerable piece hun, great job.
21st Nov 2012 6:46pm
Thank you very much,
I'm trying to write softer pieces..and not taint everything with anger..
I'm trying to write softer pieces..and not taint everything with anger..
21st Nov 2012 6:52pm
It's good to have balance, I had that same problem with my poetry up until a few months ago. Your good with fragile pieces, keep it up :) it brings clarity and a sense of piece of mind.
21st Nov 2012 6:54pm
