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W-S-M
(Entered in the local "Write a poem about Weston-Super-Mare Comp)
"W-S-M" By Marcus Cooke
For my sins
this is my town
i don't know what you have heard?
i found it eating its own balls
i took it
adapted it
and made it my own.
But this town is out of control
there has to be a way
to take it back.
yeah, its populated with scum and disease
and people who would rather mug you
then shake your hand,
but this is still my turf.
i am going to get out of here
somehow!!!
"W-S-M" By Marcus Cooke
For my sins
this is my town
i don't know what you have heard?
i found it eating its own balls
i took it
adapted it
and made it my own.
But this town is out of control
there has to be a way
to take it back.
yeah, its populated with scum and disease
and people who would rather mug you
then shake your hand,
but this is still my turf.
i am going to get out of here
somehow!!!
Written by
zenithquasar77
(Marcus cooke)
Published 20th Nov 2012
| Edited 22nd May 2013
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Re: W-S-M
20th Nov 2012 12:18pm
re: Re: W-S-M
20th Nov 2012 12:38pm
Lol i sumbmitted it dint think i will get anywhere other entrys from other poets portay weston as "a megestic getaway spot" couldnot have that now could i lol.
many thanks for reading cheers
marcus
many thanks for reading cheers
marcus
Re: W-S-M
Anonymous
20th Nov 2012 12:23pm
Best of luck in the competition to you Marcus!
Cheers
GD
Cheers
GD
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re: Re: W-S-M
20th Nov 2012 12:39pm
Many thanks my lady, im not sure im going to get anwhere but still anything for a giggle lol
many thanks for reading
marcus
many thanks for reading
marcus
Re: W-S-M
Anonymous
20th Nov 2012 3:15pm
Good luck marcus
thumbs up
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Re: W-S-M
20th Nov 2012 3:18pm
Re: W-S-M
20th Nov 2012 4:06pm
Ahhh old W.S.M visited the place and sat on the beach many a time, from childhood to adulthood.
Great job, good luck Marcus.
Great job, good luck Marcus.
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re: Re: W-S-M
20th Nov 2012 4:59pm
thanks very much i guess weston has its charm but its such a strange place
cheers
marcus
cheers
marcus
Re: W-S-M
20th Nov 2012 5:18pm
re: Re: W-S-M
20th Nov 2012 5:22pm
Cheers nikki it does indeed have a intresting vibe lol
many thanks
marcus
many thanks
marcus
Re: W-S-M
20th Nov 2012 5:56pm
Re: W-S-M
20th Nov 2012 6:20pm
cheers.buddy think im going to need it. though im sure the winner will be somthing like "sunset over uphill" or some other inspired cack lol
cheers
marcus
cheers
marcus
Re: W-S-M
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21st Nov 2012 1:29pm
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21st Nov 2012 1:39pm