Hurt

It's funny how discouragement can act more like honey; the more you deny, the more you don't mean it. Real invisibility takes the courage to stand in the middle of the market place and look at a butterfly on the ledge of a bench.  If you yell, "Don't look at me," they will surely look.  All masks cloak nothing.  Welcome to DU, where everything is between the lines....

I swear I love your comments so much. They r always so true.

this was really good:)

Thanks so much(:

I can relate to this, great poem. :)

Thank you (:

So short yet powerful from what's left unsaid. Nicely penned.

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There's promise in the line 'If you catch more flies with honey than vinegar' it's a sterling line.

My mom told me that right before I wrote this and that was kinda why I wrote it. And thanks(:

that short and to the point yet deep good job

Thank you!

This is goood really expresses the feeling of bein emotionly hurt. The lack of trust and wantin to be alone.
Nice write

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Wow this is an awesome poem
It's a great piece :)