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III
Killer head hung over
Cocked killer Cautiously
Levelled power at yer prospective youth
Nestled in poisoned loins
Rain & always Rain
Wept down cheeks/bed-sheets
With that stepped into the tired street
Kissing Neon
Kneeling to a Broken Virgin
Bleeding Black Blood . . .
-Saints
-Sinners
-Sacrifice
Living as one in Concrete
Hand in hand slid
Between shouldered buildings of Fear
Back
Head
Face
Neck
Laying Shredded
Killers head hung
Eyes Peeled like Shattered eggs
Hung over w/ heavy hue . . .
Murder
Musk
Seeps as an eraser
Sweeps Slate-like in its apparition
Cocked + Cautious Killer
Highways connect
A Syringe to Heaven
to the vein of sheltered Twilight . . .
Published 30th Aug 2009
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1st Sep 2009 00:35am
12th May 2010 10:18pm
Amazing, you used alot of huge words i had to look up but with each GIANT ZOMG I DUN KNO WHAT DAT MEANS words u have alot of meaning and you really have to think about this poem in ordr to get it
10th Aug 2011 11:01am
I found this quite difficult to relate to, there's so many words but to be honest it does just feel like words unfortunately. I'd like to read something by you filled with emotion and I'll look out for it in the future. Overall it's an okay poem I just think you need to pump in the purpose behind it.
