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"If Death Be My Maiden"
The souls of the dead
she wears like a robe
they sweep the path in her wake
the hour before dawn is her time
dusk is always to late
she calls me to her table
and the bones we eat there
are my own.
Death is my maiden these days
we sit on a park bench
i speak of precious things
she takes my fancy
i breath in her air
it smells of insence
i touch her thigh
cold to the touch
do i dare?
Death is my desire
she steals my interest
but its imposible to talk to her
she cant hear a darn word i say.
"Im deaf" she says.
she wears like a robe
they sweep the path in her wake
the hour before dawn is her time
dusk is always to late
she calls me to her table
and the bones we eat there
are my own.
Death is my maiden these days
we sit on a park bench
i speak of precious things
she takes my fancy
i breath in her air
it smells of insence
i touch her thigh
cold to the touch
do i dare?
Death is my desire
she steals my interest
but its imposible to talk to her
she cant hear a darn word i say.
"Im deaf" she says.
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Re: "If Death Be My Maiden"
17th Nov 2012 11:44am
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17th Nov 2012 11:51am
Re: "If Death Be My Maiden"
Anonymous
17th Nov 2012 12:37pm
What a beautiful poem, Marcus! It is such a great dark write! Loved it!
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Re: "If Death Be My Maiden"
17th Nov 2012 1:00pm
Thanks very much its part inspired on a freind of mine.
many thanks for reading
cheers
marcus
many thanks for reading
cheers
marcus
Re: "If Death Be My Maiden"
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17th Nov 2012 1:53pm
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re: Re: "If Death Be My Maiden"
17th Nov 2012 2:17pm
Cheers buddy anouther poem that came out of nowhere but the dark corners of my mind and many thanks for apprechating the comedy ending lol
many thanks for reading
marcus
many thanks for reading
marcus
Re: "If Death Be My Maiden"
Anonymous
17th Nov 2012 3:16pm
A certain finality to it marcus.
Nice write.
Strider
Nice write.
Strider
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re: Re: "If Death Be My Maiden"
Indeed, i just realised i messed the up the ending it should reas "Im deaf" not "im death a comedy ending lol
many thanks for reading
cheers
marcus
many thanks for reading
cheers
marcus
Re: "If Death Be My Maiden"
17th Nov 2012 4:28pm
re: Re: "If Death Be My Maiden"
17th Nov 2012 11:00pm
Cheers buddy, im really getting into writing dark poetry makes a change from the comedy ones.
many thanks for reading
marcus
many thanks for reading
marcus
Re: "If Death Be My Maiden"
17th Nov 2012 9:04pm
dark, chilling and masterfully written..very powerful delivery on this one, Dear Marcus
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17th Nov 2012 11:03pm
Re: "If Death Be My Maiden"
18th Nov 2012 1:42pm
re: Re: "If Death Be My Maiden"
18th Nov 2012 8:50pm
thanks very much, i shall aim to please.
many thanks for reading
cheers
marcus
many thanks for reading
cheers
marcus
Re: "If Death Be My Maiden"
18th Nov 2012 8:53pm
"The souls of the dead she wears like a robe" I like that visual.
Great dark write Marcus.
Great dark write Marcus.
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Re: "If Death Be My Maiden"
18th Nov 2012 8:59pm
Thank's very much i thought that was a cool visual to very beutiful but death like.
many thanks for reading
cheers
marcus
many thanks for reading
cheers
marcus