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"Dissected"
At school i was made to disect frogs
as i remember i refused
fellow pupill's would open there stumuchs,
pin back the flaps
and draw whats inside,
i guess at times life is like that,
i am dissected.
There is no such thing as the end of the line
its just to far to jump
entopy is moving closer
the universe will be closing for buisness soon
removed from exstance
we have been disscected.
I step outside
just for a second
it starts to rain
you could mistake them for tears
but just for a second.
as i remember i refused
fellow pupill's would open there stumuchs,
pin back the flaps
and draw whats inside,
i guess at times life is like that,
i am dissected.
There is no such thing as the end of the line
its just to far to jump
entopy is moving closer
the universe will be closing for buisness soon
removed from exstance
we have been disscected.
I step outside
just for a second
it starts to rain
you could mistake them for tears
but just for a second.
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Re: "Dissected"
Anonymous
16th Nov 2012 2:36pm
Excellent write marcus strider
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16th Nov 2012 2:59pm
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16th Nov 2012 6:01pm
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Anonymous
16th Nov 2012 5:52pm
This one is great, very original and creative, it has a deeper layer to it as well. Well scripted poem!
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16th Nov 2012 6:02pm
thanks very much somtimes poems come out of knowhere lol
many thanks for reading
cheers
marcus
many thanks for reading
cheers
marcus
Re: "Dissected"
17th Nov 2012 00:00am
different. Awesome. Out of the box. Original. Well written. A mi me gusta mucho!
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17th Nov 2012 00:03am
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17th Nov 2012 2:16am
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17th Nov 2012 10:36am
Many thanks my freind, agreed we are all indeed frogs in a dirty pond love that.
cheers
marcus
cheers
marcus
Re: "Dissected"
17th Nov 2012 6:58am
oh i remeber that so well, like yesterday loved it marcus.The poem not the discesting..
great writer.x
At school i was made to disect frogs
as i remember i refused
karen.x
great writer.x
At school i was made to disect frogs
as i remember i refused
karen.x
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re: Re: "Dissected"
17th Nov 2012 10:37am
Cheers karen, the poor frogs lol
many thanks for reading
cheers
marcus x
many thanks for reading
cheers
marcus x
Re: "Dissected"
17th Nov 2012 9:59pm
i refused to dissect the frogs, too Marcus so i can relate...love your diction and depth here...great wonderful poem
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17th Nov 2012 11:06pm