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gone
prove me right
or prove me wrong
it will not matter
once i'm gone
prove me weak
or prove me strong
don't wait to love me
'till i'm gone
or prove me wrong
it will not matter
once i'm gone
prove me weak
or prove me strong
don't wait to love me
'till i'm gone
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Re: gone
15th Nov 2012 5:32pm
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16th Nov 2012 2:47am
Thanks, my friend..i'm ok..thanks for the thought and for your comments :)
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Anonymous
- Edited 15th Nov 2012 5:34pm
15th Nov 2012 5:33pm
Short but strong poem by your pen, Faith Elizabeth, heartache talks....
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16th Nov 2012 2:49am
it sure does, doesn't it...thanks so much for your lovely comments, dear lady...i appreciate them so much...
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Anonymous
15th Nov 2012 5:44pm
Oh yes, am feeling this now. Sorry for this sadness you feel. :(
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16th Nov 2012 2:49am
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16th Nov 2012 2:50am
Thanks so much for the hugs! That was so sweet of you! I'm always happy to see you have stopped by.
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16th Nov 2012 9:51am
Often the way it is Faith, too little to late. Nicely penned and expressed.
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17th Nov 2012 6:27pm
Thank you for your lovely comments, Magdalena. I really appreciate them. :)