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Crumble
My life is crumbling down
I wish that I could turn it around
It's too late
To elevate
The things I wish I could say
But still can't do it today
Or tomorrow
All this sorrow
Is killing me
Why can't you see?
All of my pain
Is like a heavy rain
My life is crumbling down
And I wish that I could turn it around
I wish that I could turn it around
It's too late
To elevate
The things I wish I could say
But still can't do it today
Or tomorrow
All this sorrow
Is killing me
Why can't you see?
All of my pain
Is like a heavy rain
My life is crumbling down
And I wish that I could turn it around
Published 15th Nov 2012
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15th Nov 2012 2:04am
I LOVE this poem. It pleases me-not the sad content-but the rhythm and the way the words are meant to be strung together just in this way.
Thanks!
Thanks!
15th Nov 2012 6:48pm
