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visions
a silent glance
no words spoken
your eyes tell all
there are dreams
you speak in them
dreams tell the truth
a far away place
roads yet untravelled
a new life begins
in parting leave
not with a tear
go with a smile
no words spoken
your eyes tell all
there are dreams
you speak in them
dreams tell the truth
a far away place
roads yet untravelled
a new life begins
in parting leave
not with a tear
go with a smile
Published 12th Nov 2012
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12th Nov 2012 6:40pm
indeed always go with smile, short and yet sweet, great write my dear.
marcus
marcus
12th Nov 2012 8:09pm
12th Nov 2012 8:57pm
12th Nov 2012 9:04pm
Thanks so much, Marcus....i'm always happy to see you've been by... glad you enjoy it
12th Nov 2012 8:55pm
12th Nov 2012 9:04pm
13th Nov 2012 2:41pm
You have a wonderful flow. Its touching and precise with no wasted words. I think this poem is poem lovely
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