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Fire, Fire
Fire,fire burning bright!
Fire, fire burn the night!
Let it's heat, burn the street.
Take the nightmares gone astray, then sadly go away.
Fire, fire, burning bright! Fire, fire, burn the night!
Fire, fire burn the night!
Let it's heat, burn the street.
Take the nightmares gone astray, then sadly go away.
Fire, fire, burning bright! Fire, fire, burn the night!
Published 30th Aug 2009
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Anonymous
31st Aug 2009 4:49am
Short and scary stuff. What is it about?
31st Aug 2009 4:51am
lol. i'm not to sure excactly...lol.
i think that night i wrote it..i think i had a nightmare..plus i'm kinda a pyro.
i just mixed the to together. :)
i think that night i wrote it..i think i had a nightmare..plus i'm kinda a pyro.
i just mixed the to together. :)
1st Sep 2009 7:47am
Really like this poem. Its catchy in the beginning. Like some sort of chant lol.
1st Sep 2009 8:40am
The rhyming of night and bright is more brilliant then you probably imagined. Night is a dark thing (obviously :P) the clash of night and bright is significant to the fire. For bright is outstanding. Fire in the night is a very distracting feature. A calming motive. You could relate this poem to anything. I like the way it makes me think past the words to a deeper menaing.
3rd Sep 2010 10:47pm
really? thats so cool :) im glad. thanks
(sorry for the very late reply. i forgot my password and my username)
1st Sep 2009 1:52pm
