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Minds of power
Blessed be those
With mind's great talents
Enriched be the sole
To find release of worry
The mountains of life
Rugged and steep
Lay before one such as thou
Obscuring the view of future's pleasures
When the climber lose the grip
On walls of faith
And be left broken in pain
Deep in darker holes
This be the birth
of reviving thoughts
Saving the fallen
From losing the foreseen content settlements
Blessed be the souls
To possess the power
To release agony
In a mind of small
With mind's great talents
Enriched be the sole
To find release of worry
The mountains of life
Rugged and steep
Lay before one such as thou
Obscuring the view of future's pleasures
When the climber lose the grip
On walls of faith
And be left broken in pain
Deep in darker holes
This be the birth
of reviving thoughts
Saving the fallen
From losing the foreseen content settlements
Blessed be the souls
To possess the power
To release agony
In a mind of small
Published 11th Nov 2012
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11th Nov 2012 10:57pm
Ah, words of the wise, Troikill my friend, words od the wise...starting with "blessed be those" makes me think of a church prayer...
12th Nov 2012 3:46am
19th Nov 2012 9:10pm
Anonymous
9th Feb 2013 1:01pm
An air of thoughtfulness throughout the whole piece,
"When the climber lose the grip"
I think is meant to be
"When the climber 'loses' the grip"
Brilliantly written, good poetry you have.
"When the climber lose the grip"
I think is meant to be
"When the climber 'loses' the grip"
Brilliantly written, good poetry you have.
17th Feb 2013 12:03pm
I'd like every one to experience poems in their own way, so yes I guess you can change it like that. Thank you verry much.
