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Dream
well this is actully a dream ive been having for the past few weeks.
so for the past few nights ive had the same dream, im a grey wolf pack leader running threw the woods with with 2 other wolf's were running and running till we get to a frozen lake were we stop look at the other 2 wolf's then slowly walk out on the lake i get half way out on the water and the ice cracks and i fall in the other wolf's try and try to save me but they cant there scratching at the ice but im losing sight and they give up and leave me to die.
so for the past few nights ive had the same dream, im a grey wolf pack leader running threw the woods with with 2 other wolf's were running and running till we get to a frozen lake were we stop look at the other 2 wolf's then slowly walk out on the lake i get half way out on the water and the ice cracks and i fall in the other wolf's try and try to save me but they cant there scratching at the ice but im losing sight and they give up and leave me to die.
Published 10th Nov 2012
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11th Nov 2012 5:07am
dive deep into the memory of the dream. try to remember specific things. feelings, what u see, etc. put that into a poem, it will b awesome
11th Nov 2012 5:14am
that was the plan just didn't really know if it would be good or not. slowly piecing it together tho cant wait to post it
