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Blood Of War
Blood mist in the air suffocating those who dare to leave the safety of tunnel into the light. Red rose once so vibrant and pure now nothing more than a painful reminder of the beginning past war. Hope is gone pain is free.
Tears fill voided hearts and happiness can never be as a new endless war has come to be against this land of us the free. One last thing before my time is called please do not forget us the few who dared to bring you out of the tunnel and back into the light. As of now this war has no end in sight.
Never forget
Always remember
Freedom just isn’t free
Tears fill voided hearts and happiness can never be as a new endless war has come to be against this land of us the free. One last thing before my time is called please do not forget us the few who dared to bring you out of the tunnel and back into the light. As of now this war has no end in sight.
Never forget
Always remember
Freedom just isn’t free
Published 10th Nov 2012
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10th Nov 2012 4:39am
Oh. I was prepared for something slightly nasty. This was good though. Love the last line. Awesome. Good job, for your first poem.
10th Nov 2012 4:47am
by no means is this my first lol and i didnt mean to click the extreme content button lol but i shall post more
Anonymous
10th Nov 2012 5:24am
A litterary work of art. Wonderfull job. diddo on the request for another. Forgivness for the finger slip (hitting the extreme content button).
