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I wish I wish
I'd love to make love, to you!
To know the things that you do
To hear the things that you say
To feel the way that you play
To look at you as you cum
I wish I wish I was the one
To know the things that you do
To hear the things that you say
To feel the way that you play
To look at you as you cum
I wish I wish I was the one
Published 31st Oct 2012
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31st Oct 2012 6:44am
Don't know if you missed a short word from the top line but anyway, without taking away or adding words, it could read arrestingly if it were given two punctuation marks, making it:
I'd love to make love, you!
I'd love to make love, you!
31st Oct 2012 7:54am
