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Stupid me.
Fuck light,
Tear my sight..
This night,
Holds no right.
Im in a new low,
Dance in black snow.
To hell i'll go,
If it let's you know.
I gave my heart,
Now torn in two.
Never was i smart,
I geuss that's why i fell for you..
Tear my sight..
This night,
Holds no right.
Im in a new low,
Dance in black snow.
To hell i'll go,
If it let's you know.
I gave my heart,
Now torn in two.
Never was i smart,
I geuss that's why i fell for you..
Published 31st Oct 2012
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6th Dec 2015 9:29pm
No need for punctuation with shortened format. Waisted strikes when less is more! Last line could be split for a smoother finish. Keep Grindin CAOS737
