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Wretched Retribution (The onslaught of parasites)
We fester in the minds of a pretentious breed
Corroding the principles of a sheltered philosophy
Raping the muse of anothers filthy monstrosity
There's no compassion for a whore of prophecy
Only retribution for a race of atrocity
Just a skull fuck to society by a wrenched humanity
I fucking hate you all
We fucking despise you all
Fall to your fucking knees and pray
For a disgusting excuse of a people today
The world has become a decrepit haven of deception
Dismembered by the debauchery of shit and perception
Unmerciful are the ways of mankind
Deranged are the ways of the so called refined
Gluttony is a truly rancid sulfuric taste
The main appetizer for the disgraced
A selfish breed will always overindulge
A vindictive legacy will eternally divulge
I am here to smite the parasite of civilization
Misery won't be sacrificed nor will prosecution
You are a disease of unholy integrity
We are the ludicrous bastards of enlightened insanity
I fucking hate you all
We fucking despise you all
Your day of reckoning has arrived
Not a single maggot escapes alive
Copulate upon my blade of damnation
There's no honor left, no salvation
Violence was priscribed long ago
Malicious intent will now be bestowed
What? Now all of a sudden you're not ebullient?!
Now all of sudden you want to be emollient?!
Fucking cowardly sheep
Righteous ignorance weeps
Death for all those who deceive
Rot together in hell while you grieve
I fucking hate you all
We fucking despise you all
Corroding the principles of a sheltered philosophy
Raping the muse of anothers filthy monstrosity
There's no compassion for a whore of prophecy
Only retribution for a race of atrocity
Just a skull fuck to society by a wrenched humanity
I fucking hate you all
We fucking despise you all
Fall to your fucking knees and pray
For a disgusting excuse of a people today
The world has become a decrepit haven of deception
Dismembered by the debauchery of shit and perception
Unmerciful are the ways of mankind
Deranged are the ways of the so called refined
Gluttony is a truly rancid sulfuric taste
The main appetizer for the disgraced
A selfish breed will always overindulge
A vindictive legacy will eternally divulge
I am here to smite the parasite of civilization
Misery won't be sacrificed nor will prosecution
You are a disease of unholy integrity
We are the ludicrous bastards of enlightened insanity
I fucking hate you all
We fucking despise you all
Your day of reckoning has arrived
Not a single maggot escapes alive
Copulate upon my blade of damnation
There's no honor left, no salvation
Violence was priscribed long ago
Malicious intent will now be bestowed
What? Now all of a sudden you're not ebullient?!
Now all of sudden you want to be emollient?!
Fucking cowardly sheep
Righteous ignorance weeps
Death for all those who deceive
Rot together in hell while you grieve
I fucking hate you all
We fucking despise you all
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Re: Wretched Retribution (The onslaught of parasites)
25th Oct 2012 11:17am
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26th Oct 2012 3:41am
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25th Oct 2012 2:12pm
loved this very intense
flows great also
and loved the word "ebullient" nice choice of words! :)
flows great also
and loved the word "ebullient" nice choice of words! :)
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re: Re: Wretched Retribution (The onslaught of parasites)
26th Oct 2012 1:23am
Why thank you nikki, I always enjoy your comments. It happens to be one of my favorite words.. Sometimes I like to be a bitch and watch people become uncomfortable because they have no idea what I just said.. Lol. Passive aggression and what not.
Re: Wretched Retribution (The onslaught of parasites)
25th Oct 2012 5:49pm
you are a poetic dictionary.(thank goodness for dictionary.com). Emotional and intense. I was exhausted after reading it. I had just enough energy left to let out a "Fuck Yeah!!" Brilliant!
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re: Re: Wretched Retribution (The onslaught of parasites)
Haha thank you.. I've recently been in a mood to really test the limits of peoples vocabulary. As expected, less comments but that's fine with me. It helps me weed out the the literary educated as opposed to the people who only write for fun. I have no vendetta against those people, I'm just curious is all.
Re: Wretched Retribution (The onslaught of parasites)
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Oct 2012 11:44pm
25th Oct 2012 11:41pm
I fucking love this, I feel as you feel and I know these feelings well, your misanthropic hatred burns bright, I take comfort in the relevance and the absolute desire of the eradication of the wretched spawn of Humanity. The poem really emphasises on your misathropic hatred and it is a wonderful theme and a glorious muse, I congratulate you on coming into your own as a poet, I have much respect for you and your poetry, consider this a member of my reading list, congratulations, may your poetic plight continue forevermore.
Fucking Humans, their emotions bring them to their own demise. As much is true.
Fucking Humans, their emotions bring them to their own demise. As much is true.
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re: Re: Wretched Retribution (The onslaught of parasites)
Oh vegan, why is it that I've only recently paid attention to your wonderful art? I've only just (unfortunately!) maid a mental note to give your poetry the attention it deserves so I'm honored you enjoyed this.
People fucking disgust me.. Not all of course, but the majority for sure. Gluttony will forever be the problem of society. I find myself wondering if civilization has truly progressed or simply become more neanderthal over time... This is the result of impulsive writing created from the ignorance of a truly hypocritical bastard... Although indulging in the delight of my favorite band, Dying Fetus, might have also been helpful with the creative process.. haha.
I have nothing but mutual respect for you as well. My desire for chaos recently had been overpowering so I will most definitely be writing more.. Umm colorful poems such as this.
People fucking disgust me.. Not all of course, but the majority for sure. Gluttony will forever be the problem of society. I find myself wondering if civilization has truly progressed or simply become more neanderthal over time... This is the result of impulsive writing created from the ignorance of a truly hypocritical bastard... Although indulging in the delight of my favorite band, Dying Fetus, might have also been helpful with the creative process.. haha.
I have nothing but mutual respect for you as well. My desire for chaos recently had been overpowering so I will most definitely be writing more.. Umm colorful poems such as this.
Re: Wretched Retribution (The onslaught of parasites)
Anonymous
26th Oct 2012 1:44am
Wonderful, keep on writing!
You'd enjoy Artistic Innovation.
You'd enjoy Artistic Innovation.
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re: Re: Wretched Retribution (The onslaught of parasites)
26th Oct 2012 1:47am
I shall read it momentarily, I must light a cigarette first because I'm sure I'll need it.. Lol.
Re: Wretched Retribution (The onslaught of parasites)
Anonymous
26th Oct 2012 2:57am
Ah by all means, haha.
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Re: Wretched Retribution (The onslaught of parasites)
27th Oct 2012 7:17am
Extraordinarily good. I almost hear it set to music. Reminds a bit of lyrics the way it's written.
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re: Re: Wretched Retribution (The onslaught of parasites)
27th Oct 2012 7:41am
Thank you, I was listening to music while it was written, so yes, it has lyrical influences.
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28th Oct 2012 12:48pm
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29th Oct 2012 1:07am
Re: Wretched Retribution (The onslaught of parasites)
29th Oct 2012 7:27pm
I enjoy the intensity of this poem. You can feel the emotion boil over. I also enjoy the use of your vast vocabulary.
Slight critique: Sheep and maggots can be a little overused. What are other members of the animal kingdom that will get your point across and add some variety? Lemmings would be a good cohort to sheep; blowflies/cockroaches for maggots.
Take it with a grain of salt. Over all I absolutely love the raw carnage of your verbage.
Slight critique: Sheep and maggots can be a little overused. What are other members of the animal kingdom that will get your point across and add some variety? Lemmings would be a good cohort to sheep; blowflies/cockroaches for maggots.
Take it with a grain of salt. Over all I absolutely love the raw carnage of your verbage.
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re: Re: Wretched Retribution (The onslaught of parasites)
30th Oct 2012 2:32am
Thank you for your gracious comment.
I love critique.. One can never properly grow as a writer without it I like to think.
I will most definitely keep your suggestion in mind next time around.
Thank you again for your honest opinion.
I love critique.. One can never properly grow as a writer without it I like to think.
I will most definitely keep your suggestion in mind next time around.
Thank you again for your honest opinion.
Re: Wretched Retribution (The onslaught of parasites)
9th Nov 2012 5:12am