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How?
How can I read your words of desire when I know they are not for me?
How can I see them when the muse who inspires you absorbs your moonlight?
I cannot
I cannot
How can I write the words in my heart into words that will touch your soul?
How can I tell you of my desire to be the one you inspire to write love poetry?
I cannot
I cannot
How can I see in the dark when storm clouds cover the moon after midnight?
How can I breathe when tornados rage while sucking the wind out of me?
I cannot
I cannot
How can I sleep when the thunder I hear is the banging of your bed without me?
How can I wake when the dawn will not break before the heart that is falling apart?
I cannot
I cannot
How can I see them when the muse who inspires you absorbs your moonlight?
I cannot
I cannot
How can I write the words in my heart into words that will touch your soul?
How can I tell you of my desire to be the one you inspire to write love poetry?
I cannot
I cannot
How can I see in the dark when storm clouds cover the moon after midnight?
How can I breathe when tornados rage while sucking the wind out of me?
I cannot
I cannot
How can I sleep when the thunder I hear is the banging of your bed without me?
How can I wake when the dawn will not break before the heart that is falling apart?
I cannot
I cannot
Published 24th Oct 2012
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24th Oct 2012 1:19pm
Crushing......each word I sprinkle into a bitter meal....
How can I sleep when the thunder I hear is the banging of your bed without me?
Damn, PM.....
How can I sleep when the thunder I hear is the banging of your bed without me?
Damn, PM.....
24th Oct 2012 1:41pm
Anonymous
24th Oct 2012 4:17pm
How great and how true this poem is. Super duper! :)
24th Oct 2012 9:05pm
Thank you for the super comment Visionary! I appreciate the compliment... JJ
24th Oct 2012 5:15pm
24th Oct 2012 9:00pm
Gg, I don't know what you look like, but I have this image of you wearing pom-poms and cheering Goooo-P-O-E-T-=R-Y-M-A-N! lol, thanks for commenting! jj
24th Oct 2012 5:36pm
PoetryMan in action...I love the way you play with words and how your repetition of words emphasize your thoughts and grab attention.
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25th Oct 2012 4:31am
How can I allow this day to pass without giving you poetic love! This was Great! :-)
25th Oct 2012 5:44am
25th Oct 2012 6:00am
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Art, poetry, painting, music & money
@
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/3611/15/
Also, my books, "Seeds and Weeds" and "Passion & Pain" are available @
http://astore.amazon.com/seedsandweeds-20
8th Feb 2013 11:59pm
How can I sleep when the thunder I hear is the banging of your bed without me?
How can I wake when the dawn will not break before the heart that is falling apart?
STUNG!!!!!!
How can I wake when the dawn will not break before the heart that is falling apart?
STUNG!!!!!!
9th Feb 2013 00:13am
